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Little Talker
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PostSubject: remembering you..   Wed May 23, 2007 2:02 am

hi guys
in fact it is the first time 4 me to right english prose...
so . i need ur opinion
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tonight..
sitting with ur memories..
with ur honey words..
.
tonight..
thinking of u...
of ur love..
of my hope..
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tonight..
as every night..
sail in ur fascinating world..
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no..tonigt sailing in ur fraud world..
with ur cheat memories..
with my frustrated hope..
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i can not believe my eyes..my self..
i can not believe u ..
and how can i believe ...
u didn't love me ..?
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i used to believe ..only ..u..
only u ..i trust..
only u .. my dream..
only ur dream ..i dream..
only what u want ..i want to do..
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only one question i want to ask u ..
why..
u hurt me..?
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Aspentalia
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PostSubject: Re: remembering you..   Wed May 23, 2007 1:19 pm

nice, she can't know whether 2 love him or 2 hate him, great, just classic....
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KIMI RAIKKONEN
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PostSubject: Re: remembering you..   Wed May 23, 2007 2:36 pm

<P>oh it's cool&nbsp; ya benty.well done</P>
<P>be waiting for ur next peom </P>
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PostSubject: Re: remembering you..   Wed May 23, 2007 3:49 pm

thank alot brothers...
bless u
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PostSubject: Re: remembering you..   Wed May 23, 2007 4:45 pm

hi new emotion
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