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Aspentalia
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PostSubject: The Train   Sun Jun 03, 2007 6:25 pm

....................
Where am i ???
what's going on ????
i can't see anything
I CAN'T SEE ANYTHING
i can't hear anything !!!
what happened ?
i feel i'm in some kind of a tunnel,
the ground...
the walls...
the smell...
that smell !!!
does it reminds me of anything ?
all i can remember is that smell...
and the light in the end of the tunnel...
that light, that light...
THAT LIGHT...
oh, i can't feel anything, my hands
my legs.......
...........NO !
i have to get...up,
i have to move....
(keep movin'...keep movin')
memories fading away...
but i recall the Ground shaking beneath me...
and the bright lights...
THAT LIGHT
(keep movin'...keep movin')
.....No.......
i can't go any further...
now i feel the ground on my cheek,
the blood from my head...
my body....
my thoughts aren't clear anymore,
my head spinnig like a hurricane,
The ground is moving again...
just like the last time...
When was that ???
......i cAn't rEmeBer...
remeber what.............

that is sooo...............
straaaaaaaang...................
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PostSubject: Re: The Train   Tue Jun 05, 2007 11:24 am

woooooooooooooooooooooooow.......................
........................
.................!!!
should i say beatiful , handsome , awsome , or spectacular ,
maybe i should just say it`s great..
nice work..
by the way .. it remineds me with one of A.J.`s poems ..
i`ll make him post it Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Train   Mon Jun 11, 2007 6:54 pm

Is that your own poem Walid

BEcause I know you from along time and this is the first time to see that
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PostSubject: Re: The Train   Tue Jun 12, 2007 1:00 am

thanks, samir
& yes, it's my own poem
(not like the other, actually...).
is that mean that u liked it ????
plz till me ur openion !!
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PostSubject: Re: The Train   Tue Jun 12, 2007 1:01 am

thanks, samir
& yes, it's my own poem
(not like the other, actually...).
is that mean that u liked it ????
plz till me ur openion !!
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PostSubject: Re: The Train   Tue Jun 12, 2007 1:03 am

ofcourse It was awesome
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